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Is the Amanda Hocking Era Over?

Is the Amanda Hocking Era Over?

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I don’t mean Amanda’s career. She’s a natural story teller. I hope she goes on to the heights.

No, I mean the Amanda Hocking Kindle Era.

Like Amanda, I’ve been writing all my life and have a considerable backlog of books to polish up and publish. But I could never produce the way she did when she first began on Kindle and rose to fame.

According to her, weeks of Red Bull-fueled nights of relentless writing resulted in three series that were released on demand by her growing number of fans. Sleep was the enemy and she pushed through it.

I, on the other hand, have not got this ability. I am quite a bit older than 26 – the age she was when she performed this feat – and my mind would refuse to cooperate with such extreme conditions.  So more power to her!

She did inspire me to self publish on Amazon and Smashwords though. Being a DIY kind of gal, this appealed to me, I haven’t made much money at this stage, and am daunted at the work required to get my books noticed in the ever-growing Amazon slush pile, but I know my stories are worth the effort. I chose to start small and move incrementally, which is what this blog post is about.

But Why is it the End of an Era?

The thing about Amanda’s pace of writing books, and I have heard her discuss this, so I’m not being catty, is that her books were not edited. At all. But she was selling to teenagers, who seem to be much more forgiving about this sort of thing if they like the story. Todays teenagers are the generation who do not know of a time when computers did not exist and who got the first Kindle Readers in their hot little hands. They bought Amanda’s books for their Kindle readers, loved them and the story goes on.

When I decided to try this e-book thing out, I published a few short stories that had been published elsewhere. It was a beta test. It takes me a while to get the hang of technology so I needed a chance to play around with Kindle and Smashwords and see what it was all about. My stories went public. Then, in the interests of science, I published two novellas: a very old story (2004) Memento Mori and a newer piece The Lady in Yellow. People downloaded The Lady in Yellow in droves from Smashwords. I was shocked! It attracted good reviews with one major complaint: it should be developed into a novel. (This is what I am doing, along with Memento  Mori. Being an early experimental work written when I was coming out of my Poet phase, Memento Mori has always had problems. But I love it and so do a few other people.)

My reviewers have been adults. They are a lot harder on an author than teenagers. Had I not had the ease of self publishing — had I contemplated sending the novellas out to agents and publishers — these would not yet have seen the light of day. I just wanted to see what would happen. Lucky, so far—no disasters.

Too many authors have been throwing their novels up there when they are not finished or  developed. I am shocked when a writer says they will produce four novels in one year to keep their sales funnel pumping. Maybe they have the time and the talent I don’t have but I don’t think they will be able to get away with that for much longer.

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The E-Book Ante has been Upped.

Like Facebook, originally created to attract teens, Kindle readers are falling into the hands of adults. Adults who READ. Educated, READING adults who have zero tolerance for bad grammar, sloppy execution and typos. Serious, sophisticated READERS who will cut you a new one on your Review Page for producing books that fall below traditional publishing standard.

If you want a career, it would be a good idea to take this change very seriously. Too many bad reviews citing shallow characters, plot holes, bad pacing, bad grammar, and those demonic typos, will not only sink that book, but any books that come after. Short of changing your pen name, you won’t be given much grace for changing your ways.

Thank you Amanda Hocking for opening this door. But as she has breezed through it, those of us who have followed have found a thorny path that may lead back to traditional publishing where the serious readers find their serious, even on Kindle, books.

The Importance of Imagery in the Gothic Genre

The Importance of Imagery


My Victorian Gothic werewolf novella, The Lady in Yellow was recently reviewed by Readers Den. Although this review overall was favorable, and the reviewer said she really enjoyed the book, she made a comparison that threw me for a loop, and I’m afraid may had readers scurrying. Why was that an issue for me?

It wasn’t a bad comparison, but was out of genre and therefore misleading for my audience.  Let me elaborate.

Genre is Imagery

All genre fiction is built out of iconic images that are a bot like Tarot cards. The writer uses the familiar tropes and arranges them in surprising new ways and creates distinct characters to explore this maze. In the case of Gothic Romance – for this genre comes out of the Romantic Movement of the 18th century – the reader expects darkness, moonlight, haunted mansions, ruins. castles, abbeys, graveyards, a few monsters like vampires, werewolves, witches. In my case I like to take an innocent, a child or a sheltered young adult, and put them into a mysterious, alluring yet ambiguous environment and let them figure it out.

You can see by the headers and tone of this website that Gothic imagery is what I work to convey in my stories. Its what my target audience expects. These are signals and sign posts of what i aim to deliver, a promise I hope they will be able to count on.

Governess in Britten's Opera The Turn of the Screw

Governess Stories

When I wrote The Lady in Yellow I was inspired by a few things. A photo by Simon Marsden of a medieval mural in a French chateau that was called The Lady in Yellow. There was also my love for Henry James‘s The Turn of the Screw and Charlotte Bronte‘s Jane Eyre. Beauty and the Beast. I also have thing for twins and china dolls – I own a few that are over 200 years old, and the old English/ Celtic folk music such as Green Grow the Lilies that the twins sing in the story.

Both Turn of the Screw and Jane Eyre feature governesses, as does The Lady in Yellow. A governess is the perfect outsider: working class entering the world of the wealthy, single therefore vulnerable, often young, and isolated. Perfect for Gothic Romance. Mystery or Horror. My reviewer, perhaps not knowing of these older stories, compared The Lady to The Sound of Music based on the governess factor and the nuns.

That’s OK. That’s a classic and good story. But it is not Gothic. The iconic images of The Sound of Music are lots of wholesome singing children, bright mountain meadows, a love triangle. It does get dark once the Nazis show up.Nuns are Gothic but not nuns who sing show tunes. Then there is the phenomenon of the Sing Along Sound of Music with all its silliness and fun.It definitely does not have werewolves or the paranormal atmosphere to support them. Not only that—it has a happy ending!

People died young in Victorian times. In England, the power structure forced farmers off their lands into the coal darkened cities of the Industrial Revolution condemning them to lives of poverty, toil and sickness. As a result Spiritualism was born. The bereaved flocked to seances. Ghost stories thrived and ultimately Dracula was written and we’ve never looked back. The lurking  presence of death is the underground stream of Gothic fiction.

It would have been more apt to compare my book to Rocky Horror Picture Show even there is no governess in that.

Please don’t think I’m complaining. A review is a review and I love them. It was food for thought. Imagery is everything. Your genre should appear in all of your marketing and be so clear that no one can mistake what you’re about.

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The Power of the Audience

In the end everything used in genre fiction has to appeal to the readers who love the genre and expect certain things. The tone, the atmosphere, the sense of dread, supernatural elements, power struggle, darkness and mystery—-there are all kinds of elements, but they are distinct. The images used to create crime novels may be similar, but the difference is apparent. Westerns, Romances, Cozy Mysteries, all have their stamp, even though some types of images are shared. I think Gothics are the most similar to Fairy Tales, vaguely supernatural, disturbing but familiar.

Anyway That’s my 2 cents. I would love for you to give The Lady in Yellow and leave a review – let me know if I’ve pulled it off. Comment on this blog and get a free digital copy.

You’ve heard of “The Woman in White” and
“The Woman in Black” now meet “The Lady in Yellow”.
When young Veronica Everly takes a position as governess to a pair of identical twins, she did not expect to join a family of werewolves, or to fall in love with her handsome employer, Rafe de Grimston. When Rafe makes her promise to redeem them all, she is faced with an agonizing choice. First she must uncover the mystery of the Lady in Yellow.

 

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I Am Mortal, therefore I Self Publish!

Salon des Refusés

 

In 1860s Paris, the early Impressionist painters were denied the privilege to show their works in the popular and prestigious art galleries. So they held their own shows and called them the Salon des Refusés.

Father Time Chews my Heels

My writing has not been refused by editors and publishers, all of my short stories have been published or have bee accepted for publication, but I have always been independent and have admired people who have done things successfully on their own. I also feel very pressed by Time, the old Harvester who stands over my shoulder with a scythe reminding me that time moves on, even if nothing else does. Since that old Grim Reaper is a frequent character in my tales, I suppose we have a kind of pact.

Friends who have had publishing deals, with advances, have taught me a lot about this as well. By the time they find an agent who finds a buyer a year may pass. maybe more. By the time they get the deal and see their book in print, at least 18 months have gone by.

I have been writing seriously, with career in mind, for 12 years solid and have a huge backlog of novels waiting for polish. They are Dark Fantasies written before the Harry Potter craze and the vampire craze and a the faerie craze and in the years it has taken me to hone my craft, what were once rarities have become relentless – so does Time work its ways upon us.

Then, about 2 months ago, as I was seeing Kindle readers proliferate on the bus, I was turned on to Amanda Hocking and her success with ebooks. I studied up and realized I did not have to wait more years upon years to get my stories out there. Every writer must know that stories that stay buried in the cupboard for too long rankle in the soul, they clank their chains and cry “Let me out!” and you get tired of shushing them and saying “We have to be patient.” We understand why the often refused EA Poe wrote The Tomb of Ligeia about a woman buried alive. Stories are alive and they can’t stay buried while the wheels of the publishing world slowly grind you down.

I also have a few novellas, difficult beasts to publish because of their length. But i love them and read the ones I have over and over because they are short and satisfying. I figured these would be ideal for e-readers because the pages are so small, a novella becomes a short novel almost.

Therefore I say: I am mortal, therefore I self publish!

The Success of Les Refuses

For those who don’t know about it, I re-print this from Wikipedia about the impact of  Salon des Refuses, of how artists took matters into their own hands and changed the art world forever.

Many critics and the public ridiculed the refusés, which included such now-famous paintings as Édouard Manet‘s Luncheon on the Grass (Le déjeuner sur l’herbe) [1] and James McNeill Whistler‘s Symphony in White, No. 1: The White Girl. But the critical attention also legitimized the emerging avant-garde in painting. The Impressionists successfully exhibited their works outside the Salon beginning in 1874. Subsequent Salons des Refusés were mounted in Paris in 1874, 1875, and 1886, by which time the popularity of the Paris Salon had declined for those who were more interested in Impressionism…

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Themes in my Fiction

This post was pulled from my other blog, Gothic Faery Tales. It talks about the continuing themes on my work. Roses, Briars and Blood was created at Gothic Faery Tales and I have developed it further since.

 

What is the Difference Between Gothic Faery Tales and Traditional Fairy Tales?

Now that she is awake, Briar Rose returns to the palace and the Evil Queen. What else can she do now that she is Undead?

Gothic Faery Tales are reworkings of traditional Grimm’s Fairy Tales, or are based on their themes.

The Gothic Faery Tale writer is interested in the dark, disturbing elements of Faeryland. Whereas most contemporary re-tellings focus on sweetness, simplistic portrayals of good vs evil, and happily ever after endings, Gothic Faery Tales dive deep into the fears, anxieties, and superstitions of the subconscious.

The familiar fairy tales have been ‘Disneyfied’, or cleaned up, for children. Gothic Faery Tales evoke the primal, erotic, and blur the lines between god and evil. They are written for adults.

Vampires, werewolves, changelings, sorceresses, black magicians, dragons, all belong to the Gothic Faery Tale. It is possible that these figures of fright have always been part of the folklore fairy tales come from, or perhaps they crept in over time, leaving the pages of novels and the stage to inhabit the fairy tale realm and spice it up a bit. Of course the evil Queens and witches have always been part of Tradition and most likely held the door open for these others.

What is Our Attraction to the Dark?

Because the greatest mysteries have been forced into hiding; the most powerful truths are sequestered in the dark. To find the core, we must have the courage of a knight or a fool to enter the kingdom of shadows. To know ourselves deeply, as individuals, and as part of the whole, means to discover the vision of the light that lives within the blackest night.

Many great writers have used traditional fairy tales as a basis for their work.

The poet Anne Sexton  was one of the first writers to explore her inner conflicts through the use of fairy tales. Her book, Transformations, explores the limitations of being a woman in the 1950′s, and the dark psychological issues that kept her constantly on the brink of suicide.

It should come as no surprise that Gothic writers have a fascination with death. But isn’t death in its final form, for it is always transcended. The character who dies, or like Briar Rose and Snow White, fall into a 100 year sleep, are always brought back to life. Just as the Vampire is.  Faeries also inhabit the betwitx and between, the boundary between life and death.

There is an interest in transformation. Death is the ultimate transformer and shape-changer. The magnetism of the dead coming back to life mirrors the cycle of the seasons, mirrors the natural progression of living forms on Earth. This is primal. We cannot escape the cycles of seasons: birth, growth, decay, and death. Of all of these death is the most powerful. Yet, Gothic Tales suggest it is possible to live inside of death, to move, to relate, and to haunt. Gothic artists and writers reveal that to accept the facts is to transform them into something glamorous and fraught with desire.  Sometimes the dead become the living in the same gesture by which the living become the dead. It is the mirror realm of reversals where we walk head downwards like images reflected in a still pane of water.

Decadence

Simply put, the favored seasons for Goths are Autumn and Winter. Seasons of decay and death, silence, and a strange quality of light.

The decadence of fringe societies is like the golden decay of Autumn, a time when approaching death produces a gaudy display of glory. Winter covers the coffin under a snowy blanket, making the grave a place of hibernation with the potential to incubate new life. Gothic Faery Tales often take place in dim, ornate, quiet rooms with high ceilings and vast sweeping stairs. Places that are haunted and haunt one with feelings of dread and revelation.

Some Gothic tales seem to have been written by authors immobilized at the threshold between childhood and adulthood, and unable to cross over because of some deep fear of the adult reality. Welcome to the nightmare, the adults seem to say. Here is the true darkness of corruption and loss.

This is the border from which the Gothic Faery Tale beckons with its darkling wonders.

Come across the threshold. The dark is painful and at the same time so achingly beautiful. Of course you are curious. We embody the mystery you seek.”

Here we shall tell secrets.

The parts we are not supposed to talk about. The hidden things. The secrets that give the fairy tale its power penetrating over us.

To set the tone, here is a short piece from  1979′s The Bloody Chamber by the legendary Angela Carter. Based on Snow White, it is entitled:

The Snow Child

by Angela Carter

Midwinter — invincible, immaculate. The Count and his wife go riding, he on a grey mare, she on a black one, she wrapped in the glittering pelts of black foxes; and she wore high, black, shining bots, with scarlet heels and spurs. Fresh snow fell on snow already fallen; when it ceased, the whole world was white. “I wish I had a girl as white as snow,” says the Count. They ride on. They come to a hole in the snow; this hole is filled with blood. He says: “I wish I had a girl as red as blood.” So they ride on again; here is a raven, perched on a bare bough. “I wish I had a girl as black as that bird’s feathers.”

As soon as he completed her description, there she stood, beside ther road, white skin, red mouth, black hair and stark naked; she was the child of his desire and the Countess hated her. the Count lifted her up and sat her in front of him on his saddle, but the Countess had only one thought: how shall I be rid of her?

The Countess dropped her glove in the snow and told the girl to get down to look for it; she meant to gallop off and leave her there but the Count said,” I’ll buy you new gloves.” At that, the furs sprang off the Countess’s shoulders and twined around the naked girl. then the Countess threw her diamond brooch through the ice of a frozen pond. ‘Dive in and fetch it for me,” she said; she thought the girl would drown. But the Count said,” is she a fish to swim in such cold weather?” Then her boots leapt off the Countess’s feet, and onto the girl’s legs. Now the Countess was as bare as a bone and the girl furred and booted; the Count felt sorry for his wife.  they came to a bush of roses, all in flower. “Pick me one,” said the Countess to the girl. “I can’t deny you that,” said the Count.

So the girl picks a rose; pricks her finger on the thorn; bleeds, screams, falls.

Weeping, the Count got off his horse, unfastened his breeches and thrust his virile member into the dead girl. the Countess reined in her stamping mare and watched him narrowly; he was soon finished.

Then the girl began to melt. Soon there was nothing left of her but a feather a bird might have dropped,a blood stain, like the trace of a foxes kill on the snow, and the rose she had pulled off the bush. Now the Countess had all her clothes on again. With her long hand, she stroked her furs. the Count picked up the rose, bowed and handed it to his wife; when she touched it, she dropped it,

“It bites!” she said.

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